please read my blog.

hi, i hope you will read my blog...i try to give a very honest account of the feelings of raising severely autistic children. my children are 3 and 2 so life can be very hard but also very joyful, i try to write both sides of the story.

 

www.autismandlove.blogspot.com

 

thank you for your time

donna x

  • Your blog is impossible to read. You'd get more readers if it was accessible.

  • The fact that you posted here seemed to imply that you wanted other people to read your blog, and, if that had been the case then it would have helped if you had made it more easily readable.

    But it's clear that you don't actually care about whether your readers find the blog easy to read or not, so I appologise for trying to be helpful.

    If you change your mind and would actually like to attract a larger readership to the blog, then I'll be happy to offer some pointers.

  • I hope you can appreciate that is it a heartfelt blog. It's not an article.

    I write as the thoughts and feelings come to me hence the 'badly punctuated' and 'Unstructured' nature of the piece. It may appear to you as a huge wall of poorly formatted words but those are my emotions and as such I don't feel I need to necessarily be concerned about presenting them in a formal manner. Most blogs arent when dealing with emotion, they are merely an area to vent and place personal thoughts and feelings. As such I can't pause to worry if I've formatted the piece correctly and interrupt a flow of feeling.

    I have helped an enormous amount of other parents in my position who seem to see past the areas you have pointed out and seen the blog for the honest and extremely personal piece it is.

    I'm not after constructive critism just an friendly reader who can empathise with my daily struggles. I am offended by your comment that I don't feel is justified under the circumstances. You didn't have to comment at all and I'd rather you hadn't as you've only served to upset me.

  • I would really like to read your blog, Donna, but, like last time I looked at it, when I go to the site, I'm bombarded by a huge wall of poorly formatted, unstructured, and badly punctuated, text.

    I hope you take this in way it is intended - as constructive criticism.