Struggles with A-level essays and school refusal is back with a vengeance.

My daughter was diagnosed with ASC four years ago and is now in the first year of A-levels. She is very bright and a natural independent learner.

She is studying essay subjects (RS, History and Politics) and is now really struggling with the task of essay writing. She is also absorbed, perhaps too absorbed, in the subjects she is studying. She is reading 1-2 books a week on her subjects that go well beyond the syllabus. She is following her curiosity and always wants to know more. On the face of it, this seemed like positive behaviour. Now I am not so sure.

Her challenge with the essay writing is that she struggles to make sense of the essay question. Terms are not defined with sufficient clarity and she can see many ways to address the question. When she does eventually pick a path to go down, she loses her way as the questions she has grow and grow. She finds it very hard to marshal her thoughts and often gives up.

When she does manage to write something, it is very good. She is getting top marks for the work she hands in. However, the effort and emotional drain associated with doing the work makes this all unsustainable.

She is slipping behind and is growing increasingly anxious. School refusal has now become a real issue again.

The school are now worried that she won't be ready for her year end exams and would like to talk to us about support and options. I suspect they'll want us to get some external support for her. Perhaps involving medication.

I don't really know what to do for the best.

Any advice?

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  • I really like the approach Martin has suggested.

    Finding essay writing difficult is one of the reasons why I went the science route.

    Can you get her some help on how to write an essay. When I did some Open University study they had some good books on this. You might even be able to help by getting her to talk through the essay. I find hearing what I want to say can get me better focussed even when the listener doesn't comprehend the topic (this happened a lot with science topics).

    After Martin's idea of brain dumping, look at the words in the question such as "describe", "show", "define", "why", "compare" etc. Decide on the type of essay best suited to the question e.g. argument-counter-argument, narrative etc. Then using the brain dump pull out a few relevant key points and a few points to support each of these (this is where I found "discussion" helpful). Add the introduction and the conclusion. Setting time limits for research, for brain dumping, for planning and for the actual writing may help. Take a break after each stage. A well structured and argued essay even if short will get good marks and no-one can write everything on a topic anyway. Practice writing essay plans without doing the essay (use old exam questions). Try finding model answers to exam questions and see where marks were awarded.

    Learn to write for the exam. 3 hour paper, 3 questions. 1 hour each. 5 minutes for brain dumping, a few for planning, the rest for writing with a few for checking. It is really hard but will pay dividends and not only for A level but Uni exams as well.

    It would do no harm for her teachers to take each subject group through a how to write an essay session because even NTs can find it difficult. Would you be able to suggest this to her school?

    ,Good luck to her

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  • I really like the approach Martin has suggested.

    Finding essay writing difficult is one of the reasons why I went the science route.

    Can you get her some help on how to write an essay. When I did some Open University study they had some good books on this. You might even be able to help by getting her to talk through the essay. I find hearing what I want to say can get me better focussed even when the listener doesn't comprehend the topic (this happened a lot with science topics).

    After Martin's idea of brain dumping, look at the words in the question such as "describe", "show", "define", "why", "compare" etc. Decide on the type of essay best suited to the question e.g. argument-counter-argument, narrative etc. Then using the brain dump pull out a few relevant key points and a few points to support each of these (this is where I found "discussion" helpful). Add the introduction and the conclusion. Setting time limits for research, for brain dumping, for planning and for the actual writing may help. Take a break after each stage. A well structured and argued essay even if short will get good marks and no-one can write everything on a topic anyway. Practice writing essay plans without doing the essay (use old exam questions). Try finding model answers to exam questions and see where marks were awarded.

    Learn to write for the exam. 3 hour paper, 3 questions. 1 hour each. 5 minutes for brain dumping, a few for planning, the rest for writing with a few for checking. It is really hard but will pay dividends and not only for A level but Uni exams as well.

    It would do no harm for her teachers to take each subject group through a how to write an essay session because even NTs can find it difficult. Would you be able to suggest this to her school?

    ,Good luck to her

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