English Language GCSE AQA

Our child Roux is revising for their English language GCSE to sit this summer. They are recently not attending school because they couldn't cope anymore,

Being at home has seen a massive improvement in their mood to our great relief. They have been offered a place at the prestigious Bristol School of Acting but they need to pass Maths and English langauge to a grade 4 level. We aren't worried about Maths but the english language AQA paper is proving very difficult for Roux to take on board. Can anyone offer anyvisual narrative structures or any help please