Is this letter ok. please get back to me asp

I am writing a letter to my neighbours and i hope you can tell me if the letter is ok and doesn’t come off as weird or creepy:

Dear -name hidden- & -name hidden-  thank you for being great neighbours, you have treated me well, hope I haven’t been a pain (sorry for playing my music too loud in the past). Am not very good in expressing myself and get embarrassed telling how I feel so please forgive me if this letter sounds off

(I have a tendency for saying the wrong thing; I have been diagnosed with AS at a young age, it comes with the many flaws). It is better for me write this letter rather than saying it face to face.

-name hidden-  look after -name hidden-  and your daughter, you have an amazing family. -name hidden-  is an amazing gal (as they say in America) I hope I can find a partner as cool -name hidden-  (I first need to sort my crap out, haven’t been lucky myself). If you guys ever get marred send me message I will send you a gift for the wedding :)…. I hope you guys grow old and happy together and when you’re daughter grows up I’m sure she will be as caring and kind as you guys.

I hope I haven’t been droning on, take care and I hope you can stay in touch (you know my Facebook) and I hope you like the drawing, wanted to something that was meaningful (it was a pick of your daughter playing in the park). Kind regards.  All the best

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does it make sence? i did not want to show there names just to be extre safe