Any feedback on my writing is welcome. I like to write and I'm doing this for college but I worry it's not good enough. I've worked hard to improve my descriptions so please let me know what you think 
"The wind blew across the valley, a low whistle, across a cool breeze of wind that blew leaves from the trees. It was autumn, approaching winter fast. The days were shorter, the nights longer and darker. Martin Cole was out in the fields behind the farm. He was cold and wishing he were tucked up warmly in bed. His wife, Margareta was in the house, keeping the fire warm for his return. His return. Whenever that might be. Likely, in the early hours of the morning or later still than that. He had an injured horse he needed to get in to the barn, on his own, this would be a tough task for any man."
