Poetry (I think)

Hi,

I know some people are very averse to poetry but when I am really feeling the grip of frustration just writing out whatever comes to my head really helps. It is usually short sentences, words associating with other words. It's like my brain is so frantic it cannot form complex sentences so spits out phrases and imagery. Any way I wanted to share what I wrote tonight after a bad episode and wonder if anyone else does the same thing?

Creativity without expression.

Understanding without awareness.

Loneliness without comfort.

Words without sound.

 

Rivers without banks.

Hope without love.

Trees without roots.

Passion without foundation.

 

House without home.

Space without freedom.

Tears without meaning.

Shadows without people

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  • This poem is beautiful. I absolutely love poetry - I have a short collection out myself with a small press, including a couple of poems about my Asperger's diagnosis. Here's one:

    Developmental History

    As part of the assessment process for autism diagnosis, a developmental history is often taken from adult family members who knew the patient as he or she grew up.

    Daddy wore new trousers; Mummy left her posh-girl pupils

    to go to you, Doctor. I’ve seen the conversation’s remains –

    its exoskeleton looks like crushed ice.

    Was there a game of twenty questions? Fifty?

    More? I understand you asked them about my past

    obsessions with spiralling car wash brushes;

    with lighthouses on headlands. But I was exiled,

    held at school so I wouldn’t spill on your carpet.

    I hope you could all feel the poltergeist

    of me, simmering. I want you to have blinked

    and listened to the clock’s bradycardia; squinted

    into violent sun that howled through the panel in the door,

    down chalk tracks, to a History classroom,

    where my skirt climbed laddered nylon against fat thigh,

    tears scalding the pus-filled stars across my cheeks,

    bloody lipstick pooling on my chin.

  • The stanzas haven't come out right here. It's supposed to be in four quadrains (four stanzas with four lines each).

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