Poetry thread

I don't do rhyming poetry. I prefer haiku.

The sun is so bright

I might need an umbrella

Ow, I got sunburn

I like that. I’ll give it a try.

there’s so much manure in the field.

I’ll make sure to wear my flip flops.

poo everywhere.

i should have worn wellies.

Hi William, that's a fun poem, but Haiku follows a defined pattern of 17 syllables, in 3 lines of 5 then 7 then 5 syllables. So your poem in haiku form could be like this:

Green fields dotted Brown

My Flip flops land in manure

Wise man wears wellies

What do you think

i think that’s why they chose that word, because if it is 2 syllables, like you say, then saying ma-nure, putting stress on the second syllable (being ‘nure’), it definitely is like you are about to throw up. Almost like you are in a field of animal waste, stinking up your nose, and clogging your lungs with poo stink.

i think that’s why they chose that word, because if it is 2 syllables, like you say, then saying ma-nure, putting stress on the second syllable (being ‘nure’), it definitely is like you are about to throw up. Almost like you are in a field of animal waste, stinking up your nose, and clogging your lungs with poo stink.

What do you think